With every door that closes
another is always opened
many battles I face
I still can't be broken
a barier to a person's dream
I'm a door that can't be open with out a please
many have come and tried
but many have failed
the ones that keep pushing
where the one's that privaled
to some im just a door
but to others im a path
a path to internal greatest
so follow my giude and you will see
your future is held with me.
that poem is really good
ReplyDelete@ Zeba...try telling John what you think makes the poem good. Why do you like it?
ReplyDelete@ John. I really like the format of your poem. The way you end the lines helps to add emphasis and rythm.